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SasuNaru story

Tue May 6, 2008, 5:43 PM
This is the intro to my new SasuNaru story entitled Captured. Enjoy and please leave some constructive critisism. I could really use it, thanks a bunch!

Naruto felt like something was watching him. He quickly spun around and saw a dark figure dash behind a tall tree. Overcome by curiosity, he walked over to investigate. He slid his back against the tree. He readied his nerves for what he thought was behind the tree. He quickly but quietly grabbed a shuriken out of his back pocket, readied his arm to throw it, and spun around the tree, ready for anything. But there was nothing there, or at least there appeared to be nothing there. While Naruto was busy looking for the other’s presence, the figure was quickly running up the tree. It intently landed on the first branch of the tree, not making a sound. The figure watched Naruto continue to search for the evil presence with an amused smirk on his usually emotionless face. The dark figure crouched, powerful leg muscles tensing, reading itself to pounce on its unsuspecting prey. Naruto was still searching for the other’s presence, certain that there was another ninja around. The figure leaped from the tree, landing in the shadows. It quickly ran up and pushed Naruto into the nearest tree with unbelievable force. Naruto gasped as he caught a glimpse of his captor. It was Sasuke!

  • Mood: Obsessed
  • Listening to: Everything is Alright by MCS
  • Reading: NaruSasu fanfics
  • Watching: Any descent anime that happens to be on
  • Playing: Fullmetal Alchemist: Broken Angel
  • Eating: Chocolate!!!
  • Drinking: Root beer

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  • Current Residence: Insanity Island
  • Interests: Anime, Manga, Flute, Internet, Videogames, Computer games, TV, Food, Yaoi, Shounen-ai, Dounji, Etc.
  • Favourite movie: Fullmetal Alchemist: Conqueror of Shambala
  • Favourite band or musician: Green Day
  • Favourite genre of music: Alternative & J-rock
  • Favourite artist: Green Day
  • Favourite poet or writer: Paul Zindel, Christopher Paolini, & Jonathan Stroud
  • Favourite photographer: Don't have one
  • Favourite style of art: ANIME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • MP3 player of choice: Ipod or phone
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  • Wallpaper of choice: Naruto characters (mostly Itachi), FMA characters, Death Note characters, Sly Cooper, or Ratchet
  • Skin of choice: Doesn't matter
  • Favourite game: Sly 2: Band of Thieves or Ratchet & Clank: Going Commando
  • Favourite gaming platform: PlayStation 2
  • Favourite cartoon character: Daffy duck
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:iconstartwilight227:
Thanks for the watch ^_^

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A life without music is like a life without Yaoi....completely unbearable
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:icongirfanatic77777:
You are quite welcome. ^^ :hug:

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Short peole are smart, they manipulate tall people to do their bidding.
If you cried when Itachi died, paste this into your signature.
Click here if you love Itachi-> [link]
:iconklimene:
Thank you very much for the fav :blowkiss:!!

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:icongirfanatic77777:
You're very welcome. :love:

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Short peole are smart, they manipulate tall people to do their bidding.
If you cried when Itachi died, paste this into your signature.
Click here if you love Itachi-> [link]
:icongirfanatic77777:
You're welcome :love:

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Short peole are smart, they manipulate tall people to do their bidding.
If you cried when Itachi died, paste this into your signature.
Click here if you love Itachi-> [link]
:iconpatchy-cat:
Thanks for the fav on [link]
:hug:
:icongirfanatic77777:
No prob. Tsuzuki is my fave character on Yami no Matsuei. And your pic is really good. I love it!

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Short peole are smart, they manipulate tall people to do their bidding.
If you cried when Itachi died, paste this into your signature.
Click here if you love Itachi-> [link]
:iconhyde-sama:
thanks for the :+fav:

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:icongirfanatic77777:
You're welcome

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Short peole are smart, they manipulate tall people to do their bidding.
If you cried when Itachi died, paste this into your signature.
Click here if you love Itachi-> [link]
:iconyamigirl21:
Thanks for the fav! :D

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